Thursday, October 13, 2016

Project Pitch- Changes

I have decided to do a different topic for my documentary, but it's got some of the same aspects. So instead of positive people, I will be focusing on happiness within my Creative Arts LLP. Basically what this means is I need to rewrite a brand new project pitch. However, I can give a basis for what I will be talking about.

Claim/Pitch- Happiness is surrounding yourself with people how have common interest and that can be seen in my Creative Arts Living and Learning Program.
- Basically what I will be explaining is the idea that there are so many happy people within my LLP because we all have a common love for the arts. We have been involved in the arts all our life so we are able to get along and not have to worry about disliking one another.

Evidence-
In my new project pitch, I have eight sources. Some are from article explaining why the arts is good. For example, I have an article that gives 7 reasons why children should start theatre at a young age. It goes on giving 7 reasons why, and I really related to some of the reason because of the reasons why i joined theatre.

I also have some interviews with some of my friends that go to UK and some friends back home in Cincinnati. In my documentary I want to show my audience that happiness and friendship with a common interest is the best friendship to have. My friends are the #1 reason for me making this documentary and they are my motivation.

I also have some songs like Hawaiian Air by Friendly Fires, which is an indie/alternative song. It's upbeat and has an adventurous feel to it. This is a big relation to documentary because my friends and I are always hanging out and we really like to do stuff together. Whether it's watching How I Met Your Mother together or got to midnight pancakes at CSF. The LLP always have a great time together.

Transition-Since I have to make a new project pitch, I will want to make my transitions between my paragraphs more clearly. I simply like to put a period at the end of the paragraph and move on to my next point. I am known for doing that because I just have to get all y thoughts out before I lose them. And most of the time they don't connect and I will work on that.  

Quotes- I only have one quote and I plan to put that at the beginning of my documentary to show where the whole documentary is headed. I want to make sure it sets the stage for the rest of my project. 

Well, this is all that I can think of for my changes and I really hope it turns out well.

-Kay

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